Morrowind Adventures: A story of Heroes

Hello everyone, welcome to my FanFiction.

Here, i'm gonna write a FanFiction, like i said before, and i'll be based on Morrowind. I've been playing this game for like years and always wanted to make a story with my characters :3
For those who never heard of Morrowind, you've probaly heard of skyrim then. Well, it's the same princips, as prove, Morrowind could be seen as an older version of Skyrim, it's in the same

Characters (click to view):

Chapter 1: Free? (Click to view):

Cool! I'm gonna start one as well called Camp Wolf, I made the idea up in school :P

I shall stay tune for more.

Added chapter 1. Please rate!

It's good. I would change some stuff.
1. Don't write like a script. It throws the reader off by looking at the name and they will think this is a play. Which it's not. It's a story.
2. You have some spelling mistakes in there. Just make sure you proofread yourself
3. It's kinda short. Try and make it a bit more longer
The stuff in red is what I fixed or added more. Overall this is good.

“I've been in prison for more than 20 years now. However, i never did anything... They caught the wrong one, me... But that's not a surprise, who knows? The guards probably have been paid to arrest me... Haha. But yesterday, they made me enter a boat, and just a few minutes ago I’ve heard them say we've reached... "Morrowind". Would they.... Let me go?”, thought Dronagon.

A couple of guards came at me.
"They want to see you on deck, follow me" one of the guard said.
“A release fee? Really? So... Why the honor?” Dronagon said.The head guard replied, “I do not know. Direct orders from the Emperor, I don't need to know more.”
“Well okay-“ was the reply from Dronagon
“Bring this papers to the office, then you're officially released.” Added the head guard
“Sure thing.”
“How is it possible... I indeed have been released. But this is not the swamp... This is...Something else. However, it is familiar, I’m sure, it has to, it must... I'll find it out.” Thought Dronagon. Once on deck Dronagon awaited for more orders.
“Not so fast. Looking how you act, you haven't even used a sword, or any weapon in your whole life. And though you are Argonian, you can't even do one little spell correctly. Am I right?” said a voice.
“What the..?! You dare, I repeat , you DARE to challenge me!” Dronagon yelled.

Ice wrote:It's good. I would change some stuff.
1. Don't write like a script. It throws the reader off by looking at the name and they will think this is a play. Which it's not. It's a story.
2. You have some spelling mistakes in there. Just make sure you proofread yourself
3. It's kinda short. Try and make it a bit more longer
The stuff in red is what I fixed or added more. Overall this is good.

“I've been in prison for more than 20 years now. However, i never did anything... They caught the wrong one, me... But that's not a surprise, who knows? The guards probably have been paid to arrest me... Haha. But yesterday, they made me enter a boat, and just a few minutes ago I’ve heard them say we've reached... "Morrowind". Would they.... Let me go?”, thought Dronagon.

A couple of guards came at me.
"They want to see you on deck, follow me" one of the guard said.
“A release fee? Really? So... Why the honor?” Dronagon said.The head guard replied, “I do not know. Direct orders from the Emperor, I don't need to know more.”
“Well okay-“ was the reply from Dronagon
“Bring this papers to the office, then you're officially released.” Added the head guard
“Sure thing.”
“How is it possible... I indeed have been released. But this is not the swamp... This is...Something else. However, it is familiar, I’m sure, it has to, it must... I'll find it out.” Thought Dronagon. Once on deck Dronagon awaited for more orders.
“Not so fast. Looking how you act, you haven't even used a sword, or any weapon in your whole life. And though you are Argonian, you can't even do one little spell correctly. Am I right?” said a voice.
“What the..?! You dare, I repeat , you DARE to challenge me!” Dronagon yelled.

She's from Belgium, she's not good at english :P
Still Every write should know this. I'll I did was give her tips.

Uh...... sorry what is Morrowind?